Oh la la
I see you got some fast-reweiving fans! ;) I wih i had some too...
To your song:
I think there sould be some more different parts included. Your're follwing the same chord progression most of the time. It's catchy, yea, but it sure gets boring after a period of time. For the next time you should take some more effort on working an a 'B' or 'C' part. The section with the freaky rhythm was good, but you let it ripple away without a real relevance. What i disliked on this song were the guitar and the choir sound. They both sounded way to artificial to fit the atmosphere.
But i give it 3/5 and also i will take a look on your remaining work!
Keep it up!
-WuSchell